my LPG on my story bars

this week in writing my LPG was #3 I can edit and recraft -add or change words to make my message clear

or more interesting.

I wrote a story called bars and added some interesting details.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1sBNIWyq0WgWr9MaZMCXeSlSoDGRiizsHSn6XgANPT3Q/edit